The plot of Part B started with
Bharata’s returning to Ayodhya to find out his father’s death, mother’s
betrayal, and brother’s exile. After conducting his father’s funeral, he went
into the jungle to find Rama and have him un-exiled to take throne again, but
Rama stubbornly declined because he wanted to fulfill his deceased father’s
wishes. As he, Sita, and Lakshamana continue their exile, they face more
rakshasas, defeating all of them. Shurpanakha, Ravana’s sister, falls in love
with Rama and transforms her deformed figure to a beautiful woman in order to
seduce Rama. However, Rama remains faithful to his wife, and jokingly tells her
to go seduce Lakshamana instead. Enraged with rejection, she gathers her
brothers (not Ravana) and 14,000 rakshasas kill them all. They all get defeated
by Rama. Shurpanakha is mutilated, returning to her king brother, Ravana, with
a request to take Sita away from Rama. Ravana takes Sita back to his kingdom by
having Maricha form as a golden deer to distract Rama and Lakshamana. Jatayu, a
vulture king, attempts to save Sita, but is killed in the process, and later
tells the royal brothers that they must find Sugriva, a gorilla king, in order
to fight Ravana. Along the way, they find Shabari, who has been waiting for
their arrival for years.
As I read
this part, I thought it was interesting that there were many gandharva who were
cursed to become rakshasas and Shabari’s destiny to wait in a hermitage until
the arrival of Rama. I also found the development of my findings in Part A to
Part B interesting. For instance, the fatal flaw of needing to please leads
Rama into another predicament: trying to get the “golden deer” for his wife
despite any warnings. The curses and destiny for people to meet Rama also calls
for a pre-planned destiny from the gods.
Here are a few possibilities of what I could write about:
- Like in my reading note for Part A, I like the idea of a story about the gods trying to come up with details in Rama's life.
- Entries from Shabari's diary awaiting Rama.
- Sita's thoughts on constantly being the damsel in distress.
- A flasback to Shurpanakha's childhood and being rejected by everyone, which leads to the present where Rama rejects her.
- Bharata's mindset when he came back home and how to get his brother back.
Rama Chasing the Golden Deer for Sita |
Bibliography: Public Domain Edition Ramayana
Julie, your story is fantastic, I like how we see things from a totally different perspective. Its not easy being a Rakshasa. I wish I could give you more feedback that would help but the truth is I hope to put together such a well written work myself. You kept we captivated and anticipating how a Rakshasa would react in other situations. Great job!
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