Showing posts with label Week 07. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 07. Show all posts

Wednesday, March 1, 2017

Week 7 Storytelling: A Jealous Cousin


Who is the first person you think of who should be named heir to the throne? A first born son. Who am I? Duryodhana, the first born son of King Dhritarashtra. After my late uncle Pandu’s death, my father became king. My father had one hundred sons, and I am his first son. Therefore, I should be the heir to the throne. It’s simple logic, really. But who actually becomes the heir? None other than my obnoxious cousin Yudhishthira, who is the first born son of Pandu. Does this make any sense? No. I am the first born of the current king. Yudhishthira is the first born of the late king. The throne is rightfully mine, not his. Yudhishthira and his four equally obnoxious Pandava brothers always have everything handed to them on a silver platter. I don’t understand why people like any of them in the first place or why people treated them like they had great supernatural powers or something.

I didn’t just hate my cousins after they wrongfully announced the heir. My hatred for the Pandavas was deeply rooted ever since childhood. I remember an instance where Drona, our fighting teacher, made us all fight in mock battles, and I felt so powerful wielding my sword against my cousin Bhima. I felt my hatred for that family bubble up inside me, and I went out with full force, not caring if I injured him or not. Unfortunately, Drona stopped the fight before I could cause any serious damage to Bhima. What a shame… I wish I could have slain all five brothers that day. I would have saved me a lot of headaches having to deal with their “perfection” and ignorance for years to come.

After I heard Yudhishthira was the next heir, that was the last straw for me. I couldn’t stand to see the Pandavas steal the one thing I knew was mine. So I devised a trap to lure all five brothers AND their mother into a house and burn them all down. My first act as an arsonist, but somehow the Pandavas were able to escape and flee the city. Arjuna even bring back a beautiful wife out of the blue! See, now here’s the thing about these brothers. They are also obnoxiously loyal to each other. You would think Arjuna would be mad when his mother said to give his newly won wife to Yudhishthira since he was the eldest, but no. Arjuna give his prize away with no problems.

As if it wasn’t enough that the Pandavas had so much luck, Yudhishthira eventually becomes king and everyone, including my father, attended to honor his coronation. Even my father didn’t mind crowning him over me! But the Pandavas’ luck won’t last forever because I came up with the best, most humiliating plan ever. I made Yudhishthira lose EVERYTHING in a game of dice. Everyone in the entire kingdom knows that he, out of all the brothers, has the worst gambling addiction and the biggest pride. However, I couldn’t personally challenge him to a game of dice so I had my uncle Shakuni play him! The best part: Shankuni’s dice were loaded, and Yudhishthira lost each and every round, gambling away his kingdom, fortune, servants, and even submitted himself, his brothers, and his wife to be my slaves! However, my father had to be a buzzkill and let them all simply be exiled because they “shouldn’t be slaves.” Oh well, I’ll take what I can get.

Anyway! With the Pandavas and Yudhishthira’s wife gone, I finally was able to claim my rightful place on the throne, and the Pandavas finally got what they deserve. Everything is finally right with the world! Now I can relax and rule my kingdom at last. What could go wrong?

King Dhritarashtra and Duryodhana
Author's Note: The story of the Mahabharata mainly progressed from Duryodhana's hatred for the Pandavas. SO! I decided to expand on this hatred and view the story from Duryodhana's perspective, discussing his hatred from birth up until the Pandava brothers' exile. This way I could leave the story open-ended in somewhat of a cliffhanger. I wanted to leave Duryodhana in a hopeful mood to add a little bit of dramatic irony for those of you who finished reading the Mahabharata.

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Tuesday, February 28, 2017

Reading Notes: The Five Tall Sons of Pandu (Parts A & B)

This week, I read The Five Tall Sons of Pandu, which is Richard Wilson's version of the Mahabharata, and I'm combining the reading notes from parts A and B into one blog post since this version is fairly short. Part A consisted of the introduction of the give Pandava brothers, Arjuna winning Draupadi as his wife in a contest, Yudhisthira's gambling match, and the exile of the brothers and Draupadi from beginning to end. Part B consisted of the war between Duryodhana and the Pandavas and the battles won and lost by each character.

What I thought was interesting in Wilson's story is his style of writing and his changes from the original story. The writing style was more like a SparkNotes summary where each sentence was concise and only dealt with the direct storyline plots without much straying. The story changes was a defining characteristic of Wilson's version of Mahabharata because he does not have any supernatural aspects in the story and changes some plot lines in order to fit with a typical story of royal conflicts between regular, mortal people. For instance, in the original story, Draupadi is supposed to be a shared wife between the five Pandava brothers, but Wilson made it so she was only Yudhisthira's wife although it was Arjuna who won her in the first place.

For this week's storytelling, I was thinking about using the non-supernatural aspect of Wilson's story in retelling a specific part of Mahabharata. Here are some writing ideas:

  • A continuation of my story last week --> The Night I Gambled My Life Away <-- except now I can discuss how the family felt and how "Dominic" is their jealous distant cousin
  • Arjuna's perspective on how unfair it was that he won the contest yet Yudhisthira is the one who gets the girl (AKA Draupadi)
  • A background story on Duryodhana's jealousy and furiousness of the Pandavas
  • The perspective of Karna and Arjuna's mother on her two sons fighting without Arjuna knowing their blood relation
The Five Pandava Brothers & Draupadi