Let me tell you a story about the most heroic and just man
in all of history. This is a story about a young boy who grew up to be a king,
a man who became a legend.
ONCE UPON A TIME in
the fair city of Ayodhya, the legendary tale of the brave and handsome prince
Rama begun. Since the time of his birth, Rama was destined for great things,
namely to defeat the all powerful demon king Ravana. As the first born son to
King Dasharatha, Rama was soon to be the crowned king of Ayodhya. However, not
all desired to be under Rama’s rule. Kaikeyi, wife of Dasharatha and mother of
Bharata, wished for her son to be crowned king instead, and begun conspiring
against this young prince. Under an unfortunate debt and a promise to Kaikeyi,
King Dasharatha reluctantly exiled his beloved Rama to the forest for fourteen
years, a request Rama accepted with loyalty to his father and without
hesitation.
Refusing to be left
alone in the treacherous forest, Rama’s loyal brother Lakshmana and his
faithful wife Sita decided to joined him in his exile. Many days and nights
passed as the trio walked aimlessly through the forest. As Rama and his brother
proved their worth by defeating any and all rakshasas in their path, the royal
brothers were only truly deceived by one. On this dark day, the great and
malicious Ravana wished to steal Sita for himself. Whilst having Maricha transform
into a golden deer to distract the young princes, the beautiful Sita was left
alone and unguarded. At this chance, Ravana stole Sita away, bringing her upon
his chariot toward Lanka. Upon their return, Rama and Lakshmana were soon to
realize the deceit and vowed to do everything in their power to find her.
Searching high and
low, and befriending monkeys and bears, the royal brothers found the lost
princess on an island of Lanka, home of the demon king. And thus, the battle on
Lanka commenced. Monkeys and bears, humans and rakshasas alike fought one
another. Blood was shed, warriors were
wounded, but the valient Rama came out victorious. Ravana, the demon king
invulnerable to gods, was defeated by the mighty mortal Rama. After fulfilling
his destiny, Rama returned to the city of Ayodhya with his beloved wife Sita,
as the terms of his exile was completed. There, his throne and his kingdom
awaited. After fourteen years in exile, Rama is crowned the king of Ayodhya, and
they all lived HAPPILY EVER AFTER.
And how do I know this, you may ask? Well, let’s just say
the story of one’s father is something one never forgets.
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L
Rama, Kusha, & Lava |
Bibliography: "Rama & Sita" by W. D. Monro
This story is really interesting! I like that you did the story from Rama's son's perspective. I am actually doing my storybook project revolving around them and their stories. Your summary was really good- you included all of the important parts and did a good job making it short and to the point! I like that you italicized the story that he was telling like it was an old tale you would find in a book.
ReplyDeleteHi Julie! I really like what you have done with this story! I have yet to read anyone's story post using this writing style, so I'm not sure what is supposed to look like but you did an amazing job! I was continuing to read the story and was wondering who could possibly be telling this story, and when I got to the end I was very surprised and really admired the way you constructed this story! It definitely felt like I was reading an old tale in a book full of many old tales. Great job!
ReplyDeleteHello Julie! I think the new writing style that you chose worked well. I liked that you chose to tell this story in third person, it kind of removes the biases it would have if it was in first person, like mine was. Your use of italicizing was important to the story I believe. It added the old-fairy tale aspect to it. I liked that this was not just a retelling of the story, you really made it your own. Great story!
ReplyDeleteHey Julie! The amount of detail you put into your story was awesome! They way you wrote painted a picture for me and I liked how the story was narrated. While, its fun to see more into the characters minds, your writing allowed us to get a better picture of the entire scene and characters! You did a great job of infusing yourself into the story!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the way you told this story. It made me imagine some kids sitting around their grandpa while he was telling them a story from his past. It was very interesting to read it in this way. You also made it into this epic dialogue. I could imagine it being the opening to a movie with a narrator reading it off. Very interesting idea!
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ReplyDeleteI really liked the style of writing in this story. I love "Once upon a time..." stories!! I thought it was a good choice to tell the story in third person and past tense also! It made a good effect, and fit the story well. It made me think of one of those big giant books with beautiful gothic font with tales in it! Great job!